A LADY WOULD KNOW BETTER

An amnesiac woman is rescued by an earl dealing with his own inner turmoil.

Jasper Maycott never expected to be the Earl of Belhaven, but when his parents and older brother died, the responsibility fell to him, including caring for three sisters and two remaining brothers. On his way to visit the graves of his deceased loved ones one wintry day, he discovers an injured, unconscious woman on his grounds. As he rushes her to his estate, she briefly wakes and exclaims, “Don’t let them get me.” When she comes to again, she has no memory of who she is, but they agree to call her Jane. Jasper vows to care for Jane and get her back to health, even if he is suspicious and wonders if this is the ruse of a fortune hunter. Jane is flummoxed by what she can and can’t remember, but as she convalesces, she develops bonds with the Maycott siblings, although stern Jasper’s hot and cold behavior confuses her nearly as much as her memory loss. Jasper was set on never falling in love again, but he’s captivated by the willful woman. Until she can discover her truth, though, danger lurks and every action feels like a risk. Theriault’s adult debut features lovable characters but suffers from repetitive writing that slows the pace and impedes consistent character growth. Jane’s strong spirit and the mystery of her identity make her a compelling heroine, but the romance feels fairly instantaneous and shallow for much of the book. The depiction of grief is emotionally richer. Even though this romance isn’t entirely successful, Jasper’s siblings are a charming, interesting bunch who could each easily carry their own love stories in the future.

Some elements of this story work beautifully, but the romance at the center feels uninspired.