LITTLE CREW OF BUTCHERS

A preteen bully and a 22-year-old con artist collide in Pascal's thriller.

The creator of the Sweet Valley High series turns to adult fiction with mixed results in a story set in a sleepy town on New York's Long Island. Here, 12-year-old “Big Larry” terrorizes a group of younger neighborhood kids including sensitive 10-year-old Charley and Charley's bright, determined 7-year-old sister, Lucy. Into this small-town scene drops shady, attractive Australian Luke, who has skipped bail and hitchhiked across the country from LA. He and Larry work up a mutual enmity while they're both shoplifting from a local drugstore. When, after a rendezvous on a deserted town beach with sweet, innocent drugstore clerk Daisy Rumkin, Luke takes shelter in a storm drain and is pinned down by falling debris, Larry seizes the opportunity to amp up his bullying game into full-scale torture, with the reluctant aid of the members of his little gang. Having gotten hold of his abusive father's gun, Larry makes plans that include not just the elimination of Luke, but violence inflicted on the entire community. Pascal knows how to craft short, snappy chapters that leave the reader wanting more, and little Lucy, described as “weird” by most of those who know her, makes an appealingly different heroine. But the novel is oddly untethered in time. While it's clear that this is supposed to be a relatively contemporary story—Harry Styles, for example, is the teen heartthrob referenced—the characters say things like “Your pa don't know beans” and “My ma says a bum'll steal the eyes out of your head.” Daisy thinks of herself as a “shopgirl” and has never heard of IMDb. In addition, Luke, in whose head we spend a significant portion of the novel and whose redemption is its main narrative arc, is a singularly unappealing hero.

Younger and older readers alike will be baffled by this half-baked adventure.