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by Ian Bloom

Pub Date: Nov. 25th, 2024
ISBN: 9781944527020
Publisher: Natural Press

Bloom presents collection of short stories in which characters oscillate between loneliness and detachment.

In “A Baja Summer,” the opening and longest tale, journalistJerry Briggs has an assignment on the eponymous peninsula. As he awaits the political event he’s there to cover, he revels in excess—drinking heavily, chain-smoking cigarettes, and ingesting peyote. For company, he has Mickey Rollins, a cage fighter he’s known since childhood, and Brent Baxter, a college pal who’s in Baja for a cousin’s wedding. Jerry and Brent later go on a double date with locals Maria and Layla.Brent becomes somewhat fixated on Maria, but that may not stop Jerry from spending some time alone with her. When the assignment is done, will Jerry stick around, or will he be ready to pack his bags? The remaining eight stories are notably shorter. “Knock Yourself Out” has a similar setup to “Baja”: Burr and Leek are friends vying for the attention of Masha at a ballroom dance. The boys have planned an impromptu outing in the snowy wilderness, but their friendship could wither if Masha chooses one of them to join her on the ballroom floor. Several characters seem on the verge of isolation, even when surrounded by others. In “A Stormy Backdrop,” for instance, young Van’s pals cheer him on as he climbs a tree that’s close to keeling over. An approaching storm practically guarantees this tree will fall, and chances are that the lad will blame the people egging him on.

“A Baja Summer,” which effectively depicts a man who lives as if happiness is a distant memory, is the clear highlight of this collection. Some of the accompanying tales come across as mere snippets of longer, better-developed narratives. That’s certainly the case with “A Familiar Accord,” in which Richard Grant heads to a place called Santoro’s, where he’s part of a scheme to take care of a “racket” that’s “overextended.” It’s a moody, noirish piece that unsatisfyingly teases many promising elements, such as driver Mel and his mysterious “passenger,” who drop Richard off at Santoro’s. However, “City Country,” a snapshot of a chaotic city jam-packed with buildings and people, offers a showcase for the author’s lyrical prose: “The sidewalks blocked by legions of wide-hipped stroller pushers, bikers massaging the pavement with tread, smokers shirking their rebellion for all to whale, and when you catch a flurry of young, grit-nub children, you realize this place is merciless to a degree of comedy.” Its cast brims with intriguing characters, from fellow hunters out on a hunt to a woman who grows fond of a suitor whom she sees as a “glorified butler.” The book closes with another fine tale, “In a Line to Get Out,” which centers on Henry Blackman, who’s waiting at a train station for someone’s late arrival. He’s just one person in a crowd of people with their own problems, including an angry man demanding to speak with a manager and the lady impatiently waiting in line in front of him.

Subdued but often incisive portrayals of everyday lives.